Writing in Room One

I like playing with my brother outside.  We play rugby at home on a sunny day. By Joshua

I threw the bone into the neighbour’s garden. He was sad. By Tui

I like eating ice cubes. They are melting. They are bubbling. By Amber

Tiarna is watching the ice cubes. By Tiarna

I saw the ice.  It was melting. By Thomas

I like apples.  It was juicy. By Seth

We like apples. I like apples. I saw seeds.  By Amber

I like apples. It was really juicy.

            By Oliver